ok some stuff needed to be edited. And secondly i will accept you as a jed master since i have just started this rp. Since you have such a rank move your force sensitivity up to 100 regardless of your starting stat's. This is only happening because you are the first jedi type. You are not made head of the council, but you have a high word in the dealings of the jedi. fix that and i'll get back to you.
Re: Zar
Alright your in, looks good to me, just remeber that if any important things happen relating to you, put them down as moments in your history. And your force ability is basically very high to give you an idea of where your ability stands.
Re: Zar
Yes but please put your request in the gallery section as it will go into you ct. Sorry though im not real good with them and i can only give you the normal with a text color.