Your Age: 6 and three quaters, no just messing with u, 15
Anything you want us to know? ummm... well i know where u live so be very very afraid
Info on your character!
Name: Sereph or Beast, (dam split personalitys) or to combine the two Sebe
Gender: definitely male
Age/year group: just arrived into 6th year, 16
Position: Student
Appearance: Sebe: lookes exactully what he wants to look like. He has the ablilty to reform himself into what ever shape he feels like, so long as he has seen that shape before, though this can have its advantages its also quite distracting sitting in class with a hippipotimus.
Background: After suffering an Epiphany (which has recently been put down to as a hallucination after consuming large amounts of magic mushroom) one sunny sunday morning, John Smith decided that he would capture his gardein angel. Strangley he managed to do this thogh how is anyones guess, our only clues are that the house cointained an excessive amount of goldfish and virtually indestructable unpopapable bubbles. The gardein angel didn't take to well to being catured and sulked continually until John was forced to make a deal with the angel, it would be freed in return for an angel child. So Sebe came from Heven to live with John, it is thought that Sebes father is a fallen angel and mother is a high angel), John was delighted with the lovable, beautiful, golden blond child however after a few days John's sister who was visiting dropped Sereph and the Beast emerged and that was the end of John and his sister. After several years of wandering though unexplored terrotories alone, trying to find an escape from this misrable world Sebe decided that there was no way for him to rid himself of his other half and return to his homeland (be it heaven or hell) So now they have come to Hogwarts.
Personality: Sereph is a lovely boy, maybe a little arrogant and smart arsse but kind, loving, gental altoghther a lovley and talented boy, the beast on the other hand is pure evil, mean, insulting, a cheet a lier, someone who loves making other people suffer. put them together and what have u got? one very mixed up kid, two voices in one head and a continual battel for controle, which makes everything very confusing because no one ever knows which one has the upper hand at the time. Most of the time its Sereph but you never really can tell.
Skills and Likes: Sereph enjoys all forms of sport, socializing and learning, though he is probably more intellegent than any of the other students and teachers.
Beast is lazy, enjoys parting on rare occasions, cheeting and practical jokes, he's a ladys man that dosen't give a dam.
Weaknesses and Dislikes: Sereph is terribally afraid of cats encountering one is a sure way to give Beast the upper hand for a few hours as Sereph withdraws into a nervous wreak. He is also a bit of a showoff, because he is an angel he has some pretty powerful powers and he can't help but flaunt them.
Beast has a strong dislike of anything thats the colour white, he has a tendency to attack it, or as it often happens, the person wearing it. (poor buggers never had a chance) he is also afraid of wide open spaces where you can see for a long way, he likes dark comfined spaces.
Pet(s): Sereph has a flying horse (Pegisis) that he keeps in the forest with Hagrids Hypogriff.
Sereph has and Red gold and back python which he keeps hidden in a box under his bed.
anything else: the pair devote all their spare time looking for a way to seperate themselves from each other. Beast is particually keen on this as Sereph, being good, is more often than him, in control.
House: (Leave this blank if you're just joining, and edit it once an admin sorts you.)
I like it, very indepth. I need to thing about your house for the Mo.
Just fill the subject bar with the name of your chacter and be on your way. its abit slow here because every member has gone to Uni and Anita is just lazy.
With your profile, I think it's a great character! There are a few issues though. It deffinatly looks like you made it up as you went along (which is fine, it's how almost everybody does it), because the end of your profile is heaps better than the start.
So I'm going to ask for some edits. Not major, but a few clarrifications. Ok?
Firstly, and probably most importantly, he needs a last name. Smith is probably fine, as that was his 'fathers' name, an although we do already have a Smith, it's a pretty common name.
Also, it looks like you didn't finish the appearance. You mention later he is blonde; that should be in appearance. What about the rest of him? What does he look like? Also, I realy don't like the way he cán change his appearance. Unless you want to do a really spectacular explaination of how he learnt to do that, and why he is so powerful yet still must attend school, I'll ask you to drop it, pretty please. Things like that also mean more work during play, because you have to say what they look like in every post.
I'm not a big fan of the Angel thing, or the leaving his father thing. People on sites like this are usually better if they have one major random fun thing (for you, that's Beast), and the rest is pretty normal. My suggestion would be that the Guardian Angel just gave him a baby,and that he lived with him until he got accepted to Hogwarts. Besides, imagine the fun you could have with Beast as a normal child trying to grow up!
If you want him to arrive at school at age 16, you need mre detail as to where he was before, and why he was not at school, or what other school he attended and why he left. My suggestion would be to just say he's been at hogwarts for 6 years, or to put him in first year. Both work fine in practice. BTW, out of out currently active characters, we have 2 first years, a 3rd year, and a fifth year.
And finally, the pets. A little too fantastical. Mostly we prefer normal pets.
But, on the whole, it's a very good character! I'm a fan of the split personalities, and I think he'll fit in well!
I'll leave the Sorting to Carla, but I'd suggest Slimey Things, as a single student.
Great to see you, and Welcome to Hogwarts!!!!!!!!!
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