killing it! (freestyle)
soon as I get my hands on a mic/
I am going ignite fire and strike/
throwing bars off the top like dice/
and placing bets o your life/
format is trife/
spoken concise wit untouchable words precise/
in an alliance of rhyme science and rage/
cause iam sicker than botulism and aids/
combined wit syphilis and the black plague/
to even think you competition is a sin/
cause if I forfeited and remained forever silent/
you still wouldn’t win/
murder any contender wit a pen/
and even wit the Lakers amount of talent/
Emcees couldn’t possible contend/
Ill enough to hold my breath and count out loud to ten/
son number 1 I am prone to to slay any nigga
wit the the illusion that he can spit/
drop 2 bars and get a first round k.o./
after only 3 hits/
these fake thugs is straight bicth/
touch em wit 4 slugs inserted into their skin/
at the height of the darkest night/
cause I ignite pure fire from a source/
unknown to this earth/
and burn 5 mics wit one verse/
took out 6 emcees wit ease/
before I ever start to rehearse/
write rhymes on wedge boards/
and raise spirits wit the 7th theory of the universe/
making it clear definite given you only 8 minutes before
I leave you lifeless in a hearse/
cause I eternally shine wit an intelligent mind/
spit like hot slugs and hold my mic like a nine/
against my murderous style of rhyme whole armies
Couldn’t defend/
speak a couple sentences and take out 10 unworthy men/
yo these emcees couldn’t spit seasoned liquids wit me/
if they were drinking an old ass bottle of gin/
so ask yourself who’s the illest/
reping murder mind state to the fullest/
killing it, and leavening muther fuckers in disbelief/
torn apart piece by piece/
when my words turn into bullets/
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(7/6/01 3:56 pm) Reply
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u need to work on your rhyme structure.and use bigger words and more complexity in your spits.then ull be killin it lolz
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