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Xorn Talikis
Name:Xorn Talikis
Alias
Age:24
Height:6'4
Weight:220
Race:human
Affiliation:Sith
Talent:Sword fighting
Appearance:
This is a basic apperence....accept mentaly add some tatoos to his face! :)
-Skill-
Strength:10
Power:10
Speed:10
Discipline:10
Intelligence:10
Stamina:10
Luck:10
Force sensitivity:10
History: There was once a time, key word once, when Xorn was happy and carring.His family lived out in the country.His parents ran a farm, so Xorn learnd what hard work was from day one. He would work for about four hours and then go and play for hours.
One day was a bit odd.There were rain clouds and it hadnt raind for about 6 months.Xorn quickly finnished his chores and ran out to play.He got about 20 yards from the house when he heard a scream that turnd his blood cold.He turnd and ran to the house as fast as he could.
When he got to the house, he cringed in horror.The room was coverd in blood.He yelled franticly for his parents.He searched the house to find his dad hunched over a body in the back room.Xorn cried what have you done to mom.Xorn felt a rage of anger escape him as he ran and started hitting his dad.His dad showed no emotion, and with one move of his wrist, he sent Xorn flying into the wall,knocking him out cold.
When Xorn awoke it was dark, and smelled of rotting food.As he rose to his feet, he heard a jingle and felt like he had extra limbs.When he looked down he saw 2 big shackles around his arms.He followed the chains with his eyes to the wall.He yelled for help but no one came to his cries.Finaly after about what seemed ages, a bright light flooded the hole.When he looked up he saw his fathers hardend face.Xorn ran to attack him, but his father knocked him down flat. Xorn looked over and saw his father putting some sort of muck in a bowl. "Now you keep your mouth shut!!!!" Xorn yelled with rage "WHY DID YOU HURT MOM?"IT feel silent and then his father answerd in reply
"SHE WASNT OBYING ME!!!!"
"SO YOU KILLED HER!?!"
"SHUT UP AND KEEP QUITE, AND TRY TO LOOK RESPECTABLE TOMMOROW, PEOPLE ARE COMING TO LOOK AT YOU!!!"
And with that the hatch slammed shut, and trapted Xorn in the dark.His head felt heavy as it began swirling with thought. What just happend, Why am I down here?, What did he mean by people were coming to see him tommorow.The questions wizzed through his head untill he passed out.
He awoke to pain of a stick being jabed into his side.At first grogy, but then snaped awake.When he looked up, he saw a person, couldnt tell whether it was a man or women due to the mask.The person then told him to strip naked and stand there for inspection.As the perosn looked over his body, he looked over its shoulder and saw his dad and another masked person talking.His dad looked to be signing things.Xorn the looked back to the person at his side.It was feeling his muscles.Xorn looked backed to his father who happend to be standing infront of him now.He stared with hate, on the inside he hoped that his dad could feel the pain he felt the last 2 days.He asked what was going on but all he got was a shoulder turn and then he was drug into a ship.
On the inside of the ship, they chaind him to a seat next to a man of about 26.After the people left, the man turnd and introduced himself as Vern Tanzor.Xorn had only one thing on his mind, to find out were he was at.He turnd and asked the guy next to him if he knew were they were at.The man simply replied: "Why the Glactic Gladiator Corps."Xorn had such a hard time understanding things right now due to confusion.Just 2 days ago he was joking with his mom and playing with friends.
"How old are you friend?" said vern
"14" said Xorn.
Vern went on to tell him about stories of the arenas.He told of the danger and the glory.Just as he was finishing a story, the ship landed on a Tatooien.Vern told Xorn that they were at the training arena.He then went on to explain that he would be trained for a year then would have to fight for 5 years to win his freedom.
The people came in and unchaind them and drug them out into the hot sand.After they aranged the fighters in line he explaind that they were either bought, were criminals, or were prisnors of war; he also mentiond that they dont have lives now.All of what they knew was gone and to the government, they are dead.He then continued to eplain how the arena worked.When finished he said his name was Troic Zexis.As soon as that was said they unchaind them and began to train.
For the next year, Xorn had time to grow, and same with the anger inside of him.....it began to grow.It was like hell on Tatooien, if exhastion didnt get them, the heat did.Xorn worked the hardest,knowing in order to seek revenge, he must survive the next 5 years.He was an eger learner, and was quick to advance in the trainers eyes.The harder he traind, the bigger his muscles grew, he became stronger and faster.His senses grew along with his body.
A year had passed no problem.It was the night before his big fight, he layed in bed and looked to the celling and ponderd.He feel asleep and dreamd about one day avenging his mother and killing his father.He awoke the next day pumped and ready to fight.The day was bright and the ground was hot.As they enterd the ampatheater, they were instructed to pick up weapons and armor.Xorn picked up a blade, a helmet and gauntlets.Next they were instructed to wait at the gate untill they were announced.He looked around at every body, he felt like a giant and compared to every one he was.He was the biggest dude there.When he looked to his right he saw vern and gave him a nod of good luck.
Next thing the gate was open and they had to run out.The sun shown brightly.Soon it got quite and then with out warning, the fight began.Xorn wasted no time to kill about 4 of the 10 enemies there.The load screams from both sides,the smell of blood in the hot sun, it all hit Xorns senses like a wall.He looked around and saw only 3 including him, out of the 8 left were alive,and 4 of the enemy.Vern,Xorn and Gorrdo(the third fighter) took a tacticle aprouch.The tried flanking and killed 2 but they lost Gorrdo.When he looked to his left,he saw that vern was wounded in the leg.Vern threw Xorn his blade and Xorn quickly went to work.He doged left,right,left, the right again, threw a couple of swings with the blades but missed.He dodged once more and took a counter swing, hitting one fighter in the neck,killing him instantly. Now it was one on one and the crowed was on their feet.They each exchanged blows but both missed.Finally the opponint landed a blow.It had swung and cut Xorn's chest.It was like something exploded in him.All the frustation and anger had awoken in him.With a fury he charged and took a hard swing at the opponent.The opponent tried to block with his sword, but it shatterd under the force of the blow.He took one final swing and cracked the warriors shield in half, and hit him in the face.Xorn just released the sword and the opponent fell back with the blade stuck in its face.He looked to vern, but some how in the confusion Vern had been stabbed in the chest.All Xorn could do is walk off the field.The crowed rumbled with approvel.
Later that night,Troic congradulated Xorn and told him that there was a special gift inside of him aching to be unleashed.All Xorn could do was nod.......
The next 5 years slipped by so fast.For every battle won,he got a tatoo on his body.Xorn was one of the top conpetators in the galaxy.He had won riches and fame, but he didnt want any of it, all he wanted was revenge.After his last battle,Troic granted him with his freedom.The first thing he did was get a tatoo on his face to remind him the hell he went through and the prize he won.
For the next 3 years he searched for the scumbag known as his father.He found him back on Naboo, in a new house with a new family.Xorn wasted no time in breaking up his fathers happy life.He busted in the door and grabbed his father by the neck.His father had aged so much.
"Who are you...what do you want" asked his father
"You dont remember me?....YOUR OWN FLESH AND BLOOD!?!, I WANT REVENGE!!!!!" said Xorn.
The grip around his fathers neck tightned.Out of nowhere, a woman came runing at Xorn with fists raised.All Xorn did was look in here direction and she feel foward........What was that Xorn thought, but quickly brushed it aside.He threw his father against the wall.
"DID YOU EVEN TELL HER ABOUT ME OR MOM, NO YOU DIDNT BECAUSE YOUR WEAK!!!!!!!!!!!"
Xorn hit him with every pause.
"YOU KILLED HER BECAUSE SHE WOULDNT OBEY!?!"
He turnd to the new wife
"HE KILLED MY MOTHER AND THEN SOLD ME TO SLAVRY,HES A WORM"
and wih that,Xorn pulled a blade and stabbed his father threw the neck.Then he turnd on the wife, and raised the sword and dealt her a death blow.All he had waited for for the last 5 years was over.5 years of pain ended with 5 minutes of death.It was over....finaly
He didnt know what to do now.....he had accomplished his goal.As he began to walk to the city, a man in a black cloak stoped him.He told Xorn that the force was strong in him and that he needed to come with him.Xorn accepted with curiosity and left naboo with the stranger........
Personality:Xorn is a cold hard man.His eyes are cold and dark.At one time they say Xorn had a soul, but now there is an empty, deep hole of hate.His heart is black with rage for his father. Xorn is one of those people who rarly talks and uses his actions as speech.
Equipment:nothing, he has arrived at the sith temple ready to be trained.
Vehicles:(will i be able to abtain ships as i continue the story?)
Theme song:
Hey dude is it ok if i used my chara bio from Unforseen destiny?I havent had time to think of a new chara....I hope this is ok...an if you need an Mod, just let me know i can assist you in any way lol!
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