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Dark Soul Warrior
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(6/19/05 5:53 pm)
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The Black Skull Review and Discussion
Okay. The name sucks, but as the stori continues, it has some sort of meaning, "The Black Skull". Now start saying in wich other points the story sucks, but remember, this is my first one and I have no expereince (in this field)

Alcolyte Ackbar
Servant of Count Boobu
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(6/19/05 8:25 pm)
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Re: The Black Skull Review and Discussion
Hmm, interesting. Its nice to see some physcological writing in fics. I hope to see more soon.

Darth Yogi aka Count Boobu
The Dark Lord Of The Silliness
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(6/19/05 8:38 pm)
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Re: The Black Skull Review and Discussion
It looks like you're putting a lot of effort into this, dude. It's better written than some first time fanfics I've seen in the past. I'm really interested in seeing where this is going. Keep up the good work. :)

Dark Soul Warrior
Title, huh? Well......err.......look! A monkey!
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(6/20/05 1:15 pm)
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Re: The Black Skull Review and Discussion
Thank ya, guys!

Dark Soul Warrior
Lord Of The Punishment
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(11/4/05 7:17 am)
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Re: The Black Skull Review and Discussion
Heh.... sorry for the delay updating....

Dark Soul Warrior
Lord Of The Punishment
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(1/29/06 1:04 pm)
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Re: The Black Skull Review and Discussion
Okay. I wil say it now. I am here to say that I will NOT continue with The Black Skull, for many reasons:

1st: I couldn't make the story take the "path" I wanted. I don't know if I can't explain myself well, but it didn't go as I wanted. I repent for the third and last update.

2nd: I lost the inspiration. When I think on it, I can't imagine what happens after, not even while I hear SW music (wich usually makes me feel in some kind of "trance" and boosts a lot my imagination, I feel the words coming to my mind, oh well, whatever.)

3rd: I find third-person writing extremely difficult. If I make another fan fic ever again (something that will surely happen) I'll make it in first person. In that way, I can describe the character's feelings and reflections far better than in third person, plus I like to write in first person a lot more.

And to finish, I will apologize for making you lose time in reading it and missing the end, and for using space in your forums with something useless.

Darth Yogi aka Count Boobu
The Dark Lord Of The Silliness
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(1/29/06 4:18 pm)
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Re: The Black Skull Review and Discussion
Don't sweat it dude. I found the same thing happening to me with Orzo the 3rd. So don't worry about it.

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