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PW Earsman
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(5/24/02 3:59 pm)
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Running on the Spot. (a sonnet)
I watch her from the corner of my eye,
not game to meet her gaze or let her know
that I can feel an incandescent glow
surround me ev'ry time she passes by.
He's looking now; I really wonder why
he doesn't just walk up to me and so
begin a gentle friendship he and I
might just lie-back in, going with the flow?

I'm sure she doesn't even know I'm here,
or that her beauty strikes me dumb with fear.
Why can't he guess I'd like for us to meet
and not just pass like strangers in the street?

Oh well, I guess it's never meant to be.
Oh well, I guess it's never meant to be.

Soho
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(5/30/02 11:33 am)
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Re: Running on the Spot. (a sonnet)
This really appealed to me because I like poems that describe little street scenes, bar scenes, airport lobby and railway station scenes. The situation you describe is common enough, but the poem is so well composed and simply told, if it weren't a sonnet it could be one of those old "anonymous ballads" from Scotland or England -- encounters so ancient they are like verbal icons - something you might find in an etching or on a tarot card.

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