Relapse.......
I wrote this today...haha you'd laugh at my inspiration
You keep jumping
There’s no way to stay
Alive down here.
Away from the things
You need to be thriving out there
I try to save you but you
Come back
I try to save you but
You come back…
Why wont you join the others in the place where u belong?
Your growing weaker,
Your body is growing frail
Please don’t relapse,
Let me free you
Please don’t relapse
Free yourself
Please don’t relapse
To your place of darkness
There’s constant retreat in this place of darkness
Away from your destructive sun.
Is there refuge from the dangers?
Is falling into the shadows really keeping you alive?
**What do u guys think about it??** Edited by: Sasha4Ethinker at: 8/1/02 12:52:11 pm
hapstin Moderator
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(8/1/02 9:46 pm) Reply
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HAHAH my inspiration is soo funny. I'm the kinda person who has to have inspiration in order to write a decent poem..
Okay, my bedroom is in the basement. I have a large dug-out window. Frogs keep jumping into it, and its so deep that they cant get out. practically everyday, i Have to go free them from this window. Well, there's this one frog that keeps coming back everyday. No matter how many times i take him out, he always comes back. hahahaha! that's my inspiration. My poem proves that the interpretation of poems/lyrics/art is that the meaning is always interpreted differently. haha..my poem sounds kinda like a situation with a drug addict. thats what it seemed like when i stepped out of my mind to read it.
hapstin Moderator
Posts: 13
(8/2/02 6:30 pm) Reply
Re: Relapse.......
Frogs...lmao.....
Maybe if you kissed the one that keeps coming back - he'll turn into a prince !!
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For Sure!
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