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GypsyDancer 
The Belly Dancing Admin
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(2/22/02 6:25 pm)
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I thought I would add to the creativity over here.......
Hey all. I thought I would go and bite the bullet *geez I hope I don't get assasinated for this* :b ... and post up a poem that was published in my schools poem/writing book last year.. Let me know if you like it, but if you don't I'd rather not know.. ;) :lol


Lies and butterflies spoke gently through your eyes.
Kiss a tear, make it go away. I don't want to see you today.
Lost your soul and came to me, looking for a way to flee.
Hear you speak, close my eyes. I see little lies and butterflies.
Saw a man the other day who doesn't care and looks the other way.
I don't mind, take your time, though I know you'll never be mine.
Take your face, look the other direction.
You don't fit my expectation.
Your mouth's a black hole cave, you rant and rave, but I don't believe.
In your smile and in your eyes, I see little lies and butterflies.
Neither one means much to me.
Because that's how you'll always be.

GoofyChica3000 
Tourette's Pony
Posts: 26
(2/26/02 10:55 pm)
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Re: I thought I would add to the creativity over here.......
ooh...

I like the structure you have set up, and the imagery is really good! Nice job! :)

~G*~


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wingsong
Queen of the Damned Mod
Posts: 229
(2/27/02 6:58 pm)
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Re: I thought I would add to the creativity over here.......
oh I loveded it:) :)

michellerose20020 
Crazy Admin
Posts: 485
(3/3/02 7:57 pm)
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very nice :) :)

michelle

~You know you love someone when you can let them go and your heart never changed from the moment you had them. ~ Thanks goes to Stephie for my cute avatar!

PinaColada2424  
Pineapple Princess Mod
Posts: 134
(3/5/02 11:22 pm)
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Re: I thought I would add to the creativity over here.......
Beautiful, Gypsy. Lies and Butterflies....that's an amazing line.

GypsyDancer 
The Belly Dancing Admin
Posts: 148
(3/7/02 7:03 pm)
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Re: I thought I would add to the creativity over here.......
Awh. shucks... :o I'm glad you like it.

Nussekanin 
Bunny Queen
Posts: 15
(5/6/02 9:20 am)
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Re: I thought I would add to the creativity over here.......
Oh, Gypsydancer!
I is beautyful!
Absolutely!
Nydelig! I love it!

Nusse


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