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Dark Soul Warrior
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(10/1/05 3:03 pm)
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History of The Punishment and Bari
- This is a brief introduction to the story that will be explained in Bari's Origins and Jowrel's Fall -

Long ago, even before the first great war in the Sillyverse, there were two factions: the Separatist threat who wanted to destroy the republic, and the loyalists who wanted teh republic to rule. These tow factions clashed in a war and eventually the separatist and their droids armies were defeated and the units shut down.

Some years later, a race of small, snewy black creatures called the Zharadians constructed a facility were they took
corpses and made them into cyborgs, called OOMs, (Ortodox Organical Machines) who they had under their control. (Battle droids OOM-9 and OOM-14 were just coincidence). The OOMs look exactly like Imperial Gunners and are all controlled by different signals wich come from a hidden satellite. In fact, Imperial Gunners were OOMs given to the Empire as part of a truce.

One OOM, OOM-8, was made to kill a Jedi. The fight took place at the Zharadian facility, and, althrough OOM-8 suceeded in banishing the Jedi from it and erasing all his memories about it, he was was slashed by Mawil and had a shortcut. The Jedi, believing the OOM to be dead, left it there. Acually he was not dead: OOM-8 was very much alive, and the shortcut made him learn to control the signals, and thus the other OOMs.
With these new powers, along with his new cyborg army, OOM-8 almost drives the Zharadians into extinction. He then estabilished a base on their planet, Zharad II, and found the droid armies of the separatists by space exploring with his spybots; and reactivated them. He also produced in mass more and new types of droids. His new army, The Punishment, was made to conquer the sillyverse, and he was going to storm in the first war, but the efforts of an almost unknown jawa, Bari, prevented him to do it.

Edited by: Dark Soul Warrior at: 10/2/05 6:50 am
Dark Soul Warrior
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(10/1/05 3:52 pm)
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Bari's Origins and Jowrel's Fall
Bari was a perfectly normal guy in his days. His life was perfect to him. Everything was happy and psychodelical, and everyone was happy too, except of one. His cousin Jowrel - the "black sheep" of the family. Jowrel was jealous. Extremely jealous of Bari. He was always trying to trick and put people against him, and the fact that Bari didn't do anithing to stop him made him even more crazy about this. He even started with phisical agression, one time he tried to push Bari down from the sandcrawler while it was moving. One day, somjem Jedi sensed somethjing in Tatooine and discovered Jowrel, Bari and a friend of them with a very strange name. It looked like the Jedi felt the force very powerful in these Jawas. Bari's friend was had many more michlorians however, and his future was to lead a great faction to war, althrough that is another story.
They accepted quickly, althrough neither Bari or Jowrel knew where they were going to become after this. It is unknown what the other Jawa thoguht, but he became the apperentice of the most powrful of the Jedi. They took the Jawas and separated them. That's the last Bari saw of his friend..... but he remembers that he had got a very, very strange name.

Years passed, and the first Silly Wars broke out. Bari and his master, Hugo-a-go-go, were on a mission. Howeverr, their ship was attacked by ships bearing the Imperial mark of the DSSF.
They had to escape in separate escape pods, agreeing to meet in the town of Araknis, in the planet Zharad II, a black planet, home of the droid manufacturing Zharadians. That was the last time Hugo-a-go-go was seen. Bari never found his master again, but instead he found something quite more interesting. He walked tohrugh the rocky deserts of Zharad, until he felt something and he hidden. Looking from between the rocks, He saw his cousin Jowrel, but he felt something odd in him: His gaze was different, with something.... something evil on it! And behind his cousin, was a dead body: Bari reconogized with horror the body of Jowrel's master! Jowrel was carefuly inspecting the body, but he wasn't aware of Bari staring at him. He then found a small lightsaber in his robes: a RED lightsaber! As you surely already know, Jowrel had been turned to the dark side, but Bari couldn't believe his own cousin as a stih, even if they had been rivals their whole life. Bari's mistake was when he jumped from behind the rocks to ask him what happened, what horrible beast had done that and to explain his redlightsaber. Jowrel then stared at his cousin with a mixture of surprise, fear, and a deep, long seated hate. Without saying a word, he jumped and tried to stab Bari, who parried his blow. A lightsaber battle tehn started, Jowrel trying to kill Bari, but Bari defending himself and trying to avoid harming his cousin. Suddenly Jowrel pinned him against a rock, and started to laugh evilly. But then something awoke on Bari: All the anger he had kept hidden, locked inside him. With a signle blow, he chopped Jowrel's lightsaber arm off, and threw him over a cliff with the force. He then regained control of himself, and started meditating of what happened and crying in silence. There was a great turmoil inside him: a part of himlef said to keep Jowrel safe, and another said that he was too dangerous to be kept alive. But then, yet another part of himself told him to stop and look over the cliff: There were them, three Zharadians. They picked Jowrel's corpse up and took him away. Bari, without wasting a second, followed them.

The Zharadians were on an interesting project: they had built a huge facility to build cyborgs up from dead peolpe. They were intending to use Jowrel, along with several other dead people, to create what on their tongue were named Zurlhkas, OOMs in Common (Ortodox Organical Machines). The OOMs were controlled by signals, wich came from a satellite hidden somewhere far away from the facility, to avoid being discovered os easily. Their OOMs were created to dispose of people who interfered in Zharadian affairs, or who were close to find their facilities. Jowrel's body was transmutated in to the body of eighth OOM, OOM-8. The force, strong with this OOM, led the Zharadians (who could percieve it) to send him to kill a Jedi who was too close to find their outlaw experiments, a Jedi called Davon Mawil, who later turned to the dark side. OOM-8, althrough a bad fighter, was a very good tracker, and found Davon in a short time. Davon discovered the facility, but was surprised to find OOM-8 expecting him. Without hesitation, the OOM attacked, and a lightsaber battle started. Davon could easily fend OOM-8's blows, and actually wounded him badly many times, until he used the force to throw him to an electrical system, wich caused a shortcut in the cyborg. Davon, believing the OOM to be dead, left the place, because, just before sending OOM to fly, his memory about the Zharadian project was wiped out by a special Neural

Edited by: Dark Soul Warrior at: 10/2/05 2:56 pm
Dark Soul Warrior
Lord Of The Punishment
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(10/1/05 3:54 pm)
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Re: Bari's Origins and Jowrel's Fall
Resocialization process OOM made on him.
However, the cyborg was not dead: OOM-8 was very much alive, and the shortcut made him learn to control the signals, and thus the other OOMs. With these new powers, along with his new cyborg army, OOM-8 almost drives the Zharadians into extinction. He then estabilished a base on their planet, Zharad II, and found the droid armies of the separatists by space exploring with his spybots; and reactivated them. He also produced in mass more and new types of droids. His new army, The Punishment, was made to conquer the sillyverse, and he was going to storm in the first war, but Bari, who was carefully watching OOM-8's moves, stormed many times to destroy VIDs (wich are like VIPs but with droids, VIDs) and to ruin every plan OOM-8 had. OOM, having regained his memories, knew his cousin was alive and that it was he who was runing his plans, but could never get him. As time passed, The Punishment grew too big for Bari to battle, and he went into hiding.

Bari passed many years in the caverns of Zharad, meditating on the force. In all that time, the Jawa discovered his other personalities: The good one, his current state, the angered one, who he tries to stop but who sometimes also helps him in making good, in very controversied means (it was his anger personality the one who originally thrown Jowrel thorugh the cliff) and the dominant one, who helps him control himself and the situations where he is involved. As the second war erupted, and The Punishment arose, Bari thought he may find allies within the Rebellion, and find his former and lost friend, who does not remember him but who is still there..........

Edited by: Dark Soul Warrior at: 10/2/05 7:01 am
Dark Soul Warrior
Lord Of The Punishment
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(3/7/06 4:25 pm)
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Re: History of The Punishment and Bari
I'll have to announce (even if nobody cares) that this thread is non-canon. I re-read it and some threads of the silly wars and found far too many plot holes to make it canonical. Sorry again, looks like I did the same thing with TBS, but it will not happen again, I promise :o

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