Good work as usual, AE... Seriously, I like the way you write your stories in a journal format... Really unique, really cool... Keep it up! Can't wait for the next entry!
-SURREALISTIC HAMSTER-
Reality, Fantasy, it's all the same to me.Freedom? No one deserves freedom. All we do is abuse it and use it to our own ends.
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Very well written, Assarim! Enjoyed it a lotz! U've got a talent! Keep it up, cant wait for the next entry!
Sadistique
See me, know me, like me, want me, need me, hold me, hug me, touch me, thrill me, kiss me, lick me, taste me, love me, keep me, own me, ride me, bite me, hurt me, burn me, cut me, slap me, hit me, beat me, maim me, cheat me, fight me, leave me, miss me, hate me, damn me, curse me, fear me, for I am eternal...
My VENGEANCE is all you've left me!
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I like the new entry! I can see the introduction of mystery, you're laying the groundwork for the story, arentcha?
Sadistique
See me, know me, like me, want me, need me, hold me, hug me, touch me, thrill me, kiss me, lick me, taste me, love me, keep me, own me, ride me, bite me, hurt me, burn me, cut me, slap me, hit me, beat me, maim me, cheat me, fight me, leave me, miss me, hate me, damn me, curse me, fear me, for I am eternal...
My VENGEANCE is all you've left me!
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