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Dark Trooper Delta
The Clone Artist
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(6/3/05 6:40 pm)
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Assistance with th "Silent Threat".
Okay, CB. Here it goes. I trust you read Chapter 16, right? Well, the main problem I have is with Chapter 27. It shows the end of the Siege of Rhen Var and a battle in deep space. The trouble I have is with Rhen Var. It has become very frustating writing about it, really. I trust you read Chapter 16, right? If you did, then you`ll know I ended it up by putting "The siege had begun." Well, I was planning to describe the whole battle rom beginning to end, but that`s a bit tedious. I also don`t want to jump it, since a very important even happens there.

I would like any suggestions, since I haven`t given mch time to my story.

Darth Yogi aka Count Boobu
The Dark Lord Of The Silliness
Posts: 484
(6/3/05 6:43 pm)
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Re: Assistance with th "Silent Threat".
It's been a while since I've read your story Delta. Could you possibly send me chapter 16 so can refresh my mind as to those details you've mentioned?

Dark Trooper Delta
The Clone Artist
Posts: 179
(6/3/05 6:47 pm)
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Re: Assistance with th "Silent Threat".
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Darth Yogi aka Count Boobu
The Dark Lord Of The Silliness
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(6/3/05 6:48 pm)
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Re: Assistance with th "Silent Threat".
I'll see if I can do something about that.

Dark Trooper Delta
The Clone Artist
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(6/3/05 6:52 pm)
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Re: Assistance with th "Silent Threat".
Sorry about that. Well, you`ll have to wait until Sunday or Monday, because I have my story saved on the PC and I an currently on the Mac.

Don`t ask. :p

Darth Yogi aka Count Boobu
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(6/3/05 6:53 pm)
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Re: Assistance with th "Silent Threat".
I can wait. No problems there.

Darth Yogi aka Count Boobu
The Dark Lord Of The Silliness
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(6/10/05 4:00 pm)
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Re: Assistance with th "Silent Threat".
Well Delta, it's Friday again and I still haven't seen your story. >:

:p

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